Tiffany,

This is my first night posting, so I'm a fellow newbie. I haven't posted any songs yet, (and I'm not sure how to do it, either)so I can sympathize with your trials getting started. But you got your song posted and I got to listen to it, so here are my thoughts.

I enjoyed the song, especially the bridge, which implies the he returned dead. That gave the song a new level of resonance. I only wondered about the line: "See he never was with her". That threw me a little. Does that mean emotionally? If so, it weakens the link between them and makes the song more about the hardship of being alone than about the hardship of losing a loved one.

But I enjoyed the song. A couple of times.

"In theory, theory and practice are the same. In practice, they are not."
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