I'm going to pipe in too.

I really like the hook here. I do think the verses need to be tightened up, it doesn't seem to sing as well as it could (but neither do I) The chorus could use some clever touches too as well as the br. Example.....

Ch. (your original)
And suddenly love was on the line
my heart skipped a beat in time
We'd come so far we couldn't turn back
Because love was on the line

Ch. (?)
Suddenly love was on the line
Downloading emotions had taken their own time
No turning back, or turning off
Our souls had intertwined
Too much at stake now, Love is on the line



Br. (your original)
Our hearts made a connection
I'm praying that nothing will break
No one understands how it could happen
But I'm hoping it was worth the wait

Br. (?)
There's a connection between our hearts I pray won't fail
Started in a chat room but quickly progressed to e-mail

Just my two cents,


Caroline


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