Please post the changes. It is always good to see if advice is taken and how it affects or improves the lyrics.
As a singer I think there are a few wee probs with wording, rhyming patterns and fitting it all to a tune but the main problem is the confusion over love on the line as in on the internet and love on the line as in almost over or in trouble. This would make a really good hook and a clever twist to the story incorporating this theme into a chorus. My love online is now on the line.

Re meeting a partner and to answer the debate about internet dating. It does not matter where or how you meet as long as you are both happy.

Last edited by BIG JIM MERRILEES; 12/19/07 08:27 AM.
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