No, you shouldn't feel like an I....! You were just "used" to how I normally write. So please don't feel "out of hand" here at all. If I'd been writing normally, what you said would have been appropriate and some of it applies anyway...never can be too careful with a lyric...I've been holding my breath about the meter on the lyrics to start with and how this turns out is going to be one big surprise if I don't have to rewrite more than the chorus! LOL I really thank you for your concern, and time. Come back anytime.