Michele,

great first song!...really catchy, great hook, sticks in your head kind of song..your vocal delvery is spot on for the song theme..love your accent

what I like most about this..i'll try to describe it..it's really a punk song disguised as a country song..the attitude, vocal delivery, song topic, stacatto delivery, even the way the verse ends on an up-note with "I won't play the victim no more" and you end the song simply with "Hey!"..these are all more punk than country..i could easily see this song delivered with a much harder edge, all electric guitars, no slide, etc...i think your vocal would even drop in nicely

i agree that the "I found a man" verse doesn't fit and recommend dropping it

..ant