Hi Michele smile

That was most enjoyable - very catchy and upbeat - although, given the subject matter, almost a little too upbeat? The lyrics are actually quite profound, so my only worry would be they get lost a little in the swing of things. The odd line doesn't quite scan right either - which makes me think the tune could be even better with a change of pace here and there?

That sounds awfully critical - it isn't meant to be. I enjoyed it immensely! smile

Dan smile