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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Hi Michele: Not too shabby for your first song! Should mention that is sarcasm - doesn't always translate on the web  Agree with the others who have said it's catchy. It DOES stick in your head alright. Hook is great! I agree with Kevin that the part about finding a man might be better as a bridge. I wonder about the chorus some - no one else has mentioned it though so maybe it's not a big deal. But it sounds like you are singing about two different times in your life - but singing both in the present tense. I'd be tempted to go with something more along the lines of: Hey don't push my button I won't take it any more I've swept the anger and tears aside I know now I've got my pride So, hey don't push my button I won't take it any more Stronger, wiser than ever before And I won't play the victim no more Nice work on this! Scott
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