Hi Mark

Nice to see you back !

man that guitar part is ripping --- I LOvE the melody you make there with your instrument.. All in all - the piece feels Very moody and mysterious... a nice musical journey. There was a place where i felt that I wanted a bit more of a build melodically..

here I think it was.... but could just be my tastes.. I also think you could drop "on the way" and Not change any meaning...
Dm7 Cm7 D A
i know you'll walk my way and cast a spell on the way
Bm
to ease the pain

Anyway nice playing -- oh I also found the drum line fascinating too. Cheers jm

Last edited by Joice Marie; 05/24/09 09:14 PM.

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