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how do you think this line finishes....
Through the tears, through the rain
Through the sorrow, through ?????????? (one or more words) Probability of PAIN, 99.97% Yep, they used the word PAIN. I was thinking how even the word "strain" would work and would have been more unique. Or they could have written the line just a little different to have it end with "strain." Or, as it was a Christian song, said something about "free from all my chains," or "helped me escape the heavy chains," or something besides PAIN. I know it would have to meter out right but I think it would have been easy to do. How about - (lose the final 'through') "against the grain" "the same refrain" "for higher gain" "He knows my name" "it hurts my brain"  (just kidding) "I am to blame" ... And about 56 more...  Greg
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