Linda,

You are having such a good time, and I love it!

I'm going to be a pain and push you because I know how you feel when you listen to yourself back, and believe me, I work on this stuff with myself ALL of the time, so don't be mad, just how I know what would improve things.

I can tell you get tired in some spots because the head focus and front face focus you need for high and low notes gets hard to do. Throwing those notes out through your mouth for those lows and then pushing them up through your head for that high is hard when you are tired. I think you can do it better and hit the highs right on, just my opinion.

I think the slides are needed an bluesy, but you have to choose if you can't get a clean high on whether the slide is worth it.

I also think there are a few places where you could have cleaner cut offs, but that is diaphragm work, but if you could get it cleaner, it would give you more breathing and focus time.

I think you know all of this, nit-picking icky singing stuff..this song is a workout, but you are doing great!!

Tammy

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