I don't know what we are judging here as it's not a new song. Are we looking at the production? Linda, your vocals are good. Dan's guitar licks are great and lift the whole thing but somehow disjointed and seem as if they've been slotted in. Maybe they need to be flowing more through the whole song.
On the whole, for a collab it's a good effort. A few tweaks here and there.
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