Linda and Scott-
Sorry it took me this long to comment. I listened in the first five minutes it was up, I've just been buried in various projects, most home repairs unfortunately.

I really like the new version. At first the rhythm guitar sounded a little out of tune, but either it wasn't or my ears adjusted. Whichever doesn't matter because as soon as you started to sing I forgot all about the music! Your version is def vocal-driven. And it works nicely. I thought MAYBE the lead was a little far back, but like I said, it's a vocal imo.
Is there bass guitar in there?I'd make an adjustment or 2 to give the bass some pizzazz. I just like hearing all the instruments clearly...I know, it's a weird personal thing. Maybe an octave shift on the bass if nothing else. Just here and there.
I'm glad my guitar jam worked out for you. It was just a first take and well, I thought it was rough. But then again I'm nit-picky when it comes to my own stuff. And yes...I'd gladly do it again to save Scott some cut and paste time, if there's another go 'round.

I really like it overall. And it looks like the JP-effers (Ha!) really do too.

I have music for all of my songs and they vary from rock to country to folk and everywhere in between. (except rap)