Greg I understand your disappointment at me not liking your song much.
But my short critique was free and probably spoke more frank truth than a few hundred bucks spent with Blazetrak. You are trying to buy a dream.....they are selling a belief that dreams might become reality albeit indirectly and by implication so both of you are happy.....sadly few dreams come true. I agree with Nite but would not quite go to the extremes of bluntness and language.....the only way to get ahead in this business and earn true respect from peers is to learn the craft and learn the business.....not just hang out and write lyrics with boy bands.