Originally Posted by Zeek
It's got that 70's feel but with a modern twist. Love the use of minor chording and the unpredictability of where they fit in the song.

Spot on mix. Spot on vocal and harmonies. Hook crazy. Great panning. Chorus does what it's supposed to do==SOAR! JPF--take note!

Would have liked to see the lyrics but that's ok.

Are we a Boston fan? Little Tom Sholz in that solo but still you. Nicely thought out. My 1975 Les Paul Custom has given you a bow.

You're a talent.

Zeek


Hey Zeek - Boy it's nice to be "gotten" musically smile Thanks!

Yes Boston and also Queen ah... A little Brian May at the end of the solo, Then the ending twin solos are very "Outlaws" like.

HOOKS! No matter what, yes... Vocal, instrumental, rhythm, sounds.
What is a song without them? Easily forgotten! smile Not all choruses have to sore but they do need to be effective.

Lyrics are up now, but remember they are extremely personal so that makes them extremely hard to critique or get an angle on.
Meaning If they made no sense at all to any human being in the world it still wouldn't matter LOL
Yet still they fit the feel and the melody and music like a glove and still pull off double meanings all over the place in regards to what I'm saying... Also the play in them

Tribute to the "The Long And Winding Road"

There's a road but it's so long
And the winding way it goes
Till someday they'll know

This music business and this health issue is just too much, too long and too hard. And I'm very tired and worn put from them both. Couldn't write about anything else, couldn't even contrive songs like have in the past.. Writing "I'm Like Brooklyn" like I was born and raised there but wasn't smile Hardly even been there.

But either way try to move yourself best you can, and you will move a listener at least a few lol

Thanks Man
Mike

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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