Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Originally Posted by Bill Draper
I am really enjoying this thread! I took a shot at a song from some random scribbles in my note book. Here is:

https://www.udio.com/songs/wXQXiwoQcYfCUbyky632yA

You picked a bare bones song to test out something that has bells and whistles

But it sounds good , jury of tears is a great phrase should be the title Inmo

I think at very least people entering lyrics will realize how important structure and song forms is,/are .

learning tool

Keep at it

Exactly. The lines are bare bones and the singer made them whistle. and it allowed me to get a glimpse of how that magic is done. Fun!!
Thanks for feedback Dom.
Bill

Last edited by Bill Draper; 04/15/24 07:03 PM.