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Someone is working with me on this and has already started on a melody. Here is what we have so far but we are still making changes to make it flow better:
I used to wait for your name to appear Every night on that PC screen. I couldn’t wait to send you a note, Then you’d send one right back to me. We’d sit there alone for hours, Just talkin’ ‘bout your kids and mine. You’d ask me how things were going. I'd say, “I guess I'm doin' alright."
Before we knew it we were more than friends And that's when I realized,
Chorus: Love was on the line. My heart skipped a beat every time Your words appeared before my eyes Because love was on the line. There was no turning back, Our souls had intertwined. There was too much at stake now that Love was on the line.
Verse 2: It’s amazing how so much emotion Can be passed through these tiny lines. But as we shared our hopes and our dreams together You brought back a spark to my life. I was falling in love Long before I looked into your eyes I was scared to death that when we finally met you might change your mind.
Chorus: Because love was on the line My heart was frozen for a moment in time When I looked into your eyes Yeah love was on the line. There was no turning back, Our souls had intertwined. There was too much at stake now that Love was on the line.
Bridge: Well we've been married a few years now and every day our love grows It's crazy now to think about A time not so long ago
Chorus: When love was on the line and my heart skipped a beat every time your words appeared before my eyes. Yeah love was on the line. There was no turning back, Our souls had intertwined. There was too much at stake now that Love was on the line.
a.k.a. Ladynred
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Need comments on this song, please.
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Mrs.Johnnie McInnis
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11/16/07 05:36 PM
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Sam Wilson
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Samuel Harris
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11/16/07 09:50 PM
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Mrs.Johnnie McInnis
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11/16/07 10:53 PM
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Ray E. Strode (D)
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11/17/07 12:16 AM
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11/17/07 09:22 AM
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anne
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