Hi folks,
This is one I am working on about making a fool of myself over a girl I had a crush on. I would appreciate any comments or suggestions. The vocals are pretty weak on this. The asthma is getting to me today but thought I would go ahead and post for suggestions and comments before re-doing. Thanks

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2008 All Rights Reserved
Stephen Bills

She Barely Knew My Name

Back when I was just sixteen.
Still remember this girl I seen.
Longest hair, southern charm and that copper tone tan.

She's the new girl in school.
Florida girl, man aint she cool.
All the boys stumblin' on themselves like she's a rocker in a band.

The things you do when you think you've found your true love.
You swear you'd give her the world but it still wouldn't be enough.

You'd climb the highest mountain.
Swim the deep blue sea.
And you'll love her for eternity.
Cross the desert sands.
Grab a star with your two hands.
And hand it to her proudly for the world to see.
So in love but you know it's such a shame.
That she barely knows your name.
I only have this foolish heart I have to blame.
'Cause she barely knew my name

Swore I'd never fall again.
Like I did way back then.
My broken heart left to grieve a love I never had

But I knew there'd come a day.
I'd love again. Come what may.
Meet the girl to be my bride and steal her heart away.

But it's so hard to step out on that limb again.
Pick up my shattered pride and throw it to the wind.

And tell her..
You'd climb the highest mountain.
Swim the deep blue sea.
And you'll love her for eternity.
Cross the desert sands.
Grab a star with your two hands.
And hand it to her proudly for the world to see.
I still recall the heartache and the pain.
Though it was just my foolish heart to blame.
She barely knew my name.