great first draft..good feel throughout and the guitar licks just keep it moving..all of Chad's recording tips are great..and i agree that you need to scrub the lyrics to get your tenses consistent..i like the way you extend the chorus on the last three lines and vary the lines on the second chorus..keeps it real fresh

..ant


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