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by Michael W. Brown - 09/30/26 07:17 PM
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Mara Cole
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/30/26 01:32 PM
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Hi Lynn, Thanks for the suggestions. I think I will remove the last 2 lines on the chorus. At least on the first chorus. The rhyming section you mention got my attention too. I'm goin to set down and re-work this one sometime. Thanks again for the suggestions. Take Care! Steve
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