Hi Stephen:

I agree with a lot of the comments here. It's a nice tune, has a great vibe, and your voice is perfect for it.

Lyrically, I agree with Linda. The rocker line works for me as is - the reason is that the first verse sets the second one up like a daydream. He IS back there again.

I also agree with her on the story line - I think it would be more solid if you had a single story line - especially for this genre.

Just an average joe opinion - was a very nice listen!

Scott