Hi Randy,

Thank you so much for your input. It’s very helpful. When I go off and try to improve something, or kick it up a notch, it’s nice to have “spotters” along the way….. grin

I guess I’m too conscious of the rhyme scheme (abcbdd) (lol!) when I should just trust my inner “ears”! HA That’s really how I work anyway…I hate to be too conscious of “rules” and structure...stunts the creativity!

I’ve brought it back around a bit and posted it up top, it’s a good reference for me for when I look at it again in the future and see what my brain likes/dislikes...but I, too, am growing fond of that wooden/shallow/somber/painted/powdered face line…isn’t it cute? grin

Thanks again…much appreciated!

Kristi

Last edited by Kristi McKeever; 10/27/08 10:50 PM.
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