Hi Joice,

Well, I was hoping to get some feedback on the two versions, so thanks, I’m glad to know your preference. smile

Let me look at those little words. They are what keep things interesting, right? I’m assuming you meant using version #2:

Flipping Cuz and Though:

I can’t hold back time
Though you weigh heavy on my mind

And I won’t look behind
Cuz you weigh heavy on my mind

Subtle, yet even with just the last two lines of the verses, it seems like the “Cuz” with the looking behind line gives her a little more strength….wow…that is so cool. Thanks for that idea, Joice! So glad you stopped by… smile

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist