The wooden face is a cool fresh way to describe feelings,ya know along the lines of stone face ,long face etc. So id leave wooden face its unique and fresh.Like the way you keep the girl in the background as the observer,the person feeling pain,the person longing but yet the front she puts on trying to convince the listener that the situation doent bother herself. Nice flowing imagery her. I think when the song shows good prosody (matching lyric with melody) you'll have a pretty cool fresh way to say the ordinary love hurts song .Keep the editer workin but dont over work it .Stay with your heart on the song.Lots of luck S.Dee