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Hi Boo,
I had to reach back in memory for some of the terms--I little bit's coming back to me now.
It flows along good. A little "limericky' maybe as someone said
As far as the tone and resolution--No, I don't think it's right.
The bridge and last C leaves her as an object of pity to me and
kinda 'kills" the rest of the song for me. Though I haven't , right off, a way to do it,I'd rather see her "redeemed" in some way---given some hope.
JMO though
Y
(Is that last box of G S cookies going to waste? <G>)
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"Cookie" Rev. 5/19 again -- Changes in GREEN
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Beth G. Williams
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05/14/09 05:06 AM
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Gary Gray X
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05/14/09 06:02 AM
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Polly Hager (D)
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05/14/09 06:47 AM
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Kolstad
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05/14/09 02:15 PM
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05/14/09 04:54 PM
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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05/14/09 07:15 PM
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Beth G. Williams
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05/14/09 11:19 PM
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Wyman Lloyd (D)
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05/15/09 12:16 AM
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Beth G. Williams
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05/15/09 12:20 AM
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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05/15/09 12:27 AM
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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05/15/09 12:37 AM
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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05/15/09 12:57 AM
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Wyman Lloyd (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Douglas Murphy
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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05/19/09 07:56 PM
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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05/19/09 10:29 PM
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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DonnaMarilyn
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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05/22/09 02:54 AM
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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Beth G. Williams
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Joe Wrabek (D)
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DonnaMarilyn
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05/21/09 02:57 PM
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Wyman Lloyd (D)
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05/21/09 03:27 PM
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Beth G. Williams
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Beth G. Williams
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05/22/09 06:41 PM
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Kristi McKeever
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05/21/09 05:49 AM
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Beth G. Williams
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05/22/09 03:19 AM
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Re: "Cookie" (Oh, WYMAN!.....) -- REVISED 5/14
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Kristi McKeever
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05/16/09 05:25 AM
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