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Hi again Ricki,
Well I told you I'd come back to look and listen a little longer.....you have some great lines in there...two of my favories:
*Crazy Woman Creek runs through my yard *Still no boot prints in the snow {this one tugs at your heart!}
The only thing I was going to mention was the line"He headed west because wests the best..." I was going to suggest maybe something like....When he headed out, he went west... {so you didn't have to use west twice}...but then as I was scrolling down, I noticed you mentioned to someone that this line was a bow to Jim Morrison and had to stay... so, I can understand that.
I think you have captured the feel of the lyrics, in your vocals and melody ...a woman who has loved, and is coming to grips with the fact..that she has lost.
Kind Wishes, Gail
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