Hi Letha,

Thanks for taking time with this. I never mind an honest opinion, but I'm not sure I understand your comment.

"...it seems that it is a little timid, like there could be some areas that you are not sure of the delivery of the lyrics, maybe a little forced or loose to get them to work in the rhyme scheme"

Are you saying the rhyme scheme is weak and/or forced? Or that my singing sucks? Because I would have to argue about the former but could totally understand the latter! smile

Glad you like the style anyway.

Ricki