Hi Letha,

Don't ever worry about giving an honest opinion. I will not be offended. I'd rather be told how something may be improved than be given a free pass when there is plenty that should be fixed.
I'm still not sure what you're saying. The words aren't fitting the music in some spots? If so, could you be more specific where you think the lyric could be tightened up? This song is by no means in a forming stage. It's nearly 4 years old, but that certainly doesn't mean it can't be improved. I just can't hear it any other way without some outside influence pointing me in the right direction. That what I'm here for, to learn and get better. I can't do that with just a pat on the back. Throw down girl! smile

Ricki