Lol Ricki,

Your singing is always good, didn't mean that at all. I love your sound, always reminds me of Carol King for some reason, who is one of my favorites.

Maybe I shouldnt have said anything if I can't explain it correctly, lol. It just felt like the lyrics were still in the forming stage in some parts, like how I write. I may sing a song time after time after time with different changes in the lyrics before I decide on final ones and say it is done. And I still may change my mind later on! I guess I just felt their could be a few spots that could do with tightening up a little?

Not meaning to offend you at all Ricki, but I respect your skill and talent enough to give you my true thoughts, because I want it to be the best it can be for you. You have a great writing style to me.

I don't want to just comment on songs I love and think are perfect, although I do tend to find myself doing that alot. I wanted to comment on this one because I think it has potential to be better and know you have the skill to do it.

I am no pro critiquer, so remember it is just one amateur opinion on just one of your songs. I ususally love them to death, lol. This takes alot out of me to be even a little negative, so remember how much I like your style and you!

Letha

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