Thanks Jean for taking so much time with this one.

I really like what you've done.

All my first songs were too wordy, now they are much shorter,

but many... are less clear to the reader.

Trying to learn to keep them short and sweet, but not leave

too much out now. That's my new challenge LOL!

I really appreciate your help.

I guess I should post the copyright, I hadn't thought to much

about it because they are date stamped on the site. I figured

I'm just a novice and they're just my words, so if somebody

stold them I would just write more, and I suppose if I wrote

something good enough to steal, I'm getting better.

I'm sure I'll use alot of your work in the rewrite.

Thanks

Geneva

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GENEVA Griffin

Lyrics seeking singer/composer,cowriters,collaborators