Hey there Janice and Greg,

Hope this finds you doing well.

I really like the concept for this lyric.....and I think you have
some awesome lines in there:

*Find the good times in the midst of pain

*Life gets all tangled up in the little things
But stumbling doesn't mean you fall....it's an awakening

Wow!! Really great lines....and several more in there that I loved.

I see you've received a couple of suggestions that may help, and I don't see anything to add.....other than you have a very touching lyric, and I wish you the best with it.

Kind wishes,
Gail