Kirsti/ Mike,

I saved this for a Sunday treat, and it proved ot be an enjoyable listen for me! Clever lyrics, and I love the title hook! Music is spot on with happy pop, and it leaves me about 5 pounds lighter than I was prior to listening.. You deliver the goods allright!

In the nitty gritty department, I could hear BIAB trademark sound from the first bar. It's has a certain thin, dry tone to it, that is unmistakeable when it stands alone. Perhaps you could disguise that with something from FL, as it's only noticeable in the first 2-4 bars? I found the verse lyric lacked a little bit flow to it, but Halie's vocals made all the difference, and she made it unnoticable. I wasn't really sure about the transition from the first verse into the chorus, so the chorus seemed a tad long, but I see why it needs to be because of the lyrics. Perhaps you would want to mark the transitions from section to section, even more?

All together that was a lot of words for very small nits (for 95% of listeners, not nits at all), so please read my intro comments a second and third time to even out the representation of what I really think of this :-)

Excellent work!

PS. How did you approach Halie for this? Does she have recording equipment of her own, so you send her a track? She sure sounds world class love