I read the lyric, and the first few responses, but NOT the whole string (who has THAT much 'free' time???) but there was ONE comment I feel I want to make beyond the obviuos yes-it's-cute, nice job... and that is this:
Do you really really expect ANYONE to sing a song that s-u-g-g-e-s-t-s that you will CUT A MAN'S DICK OFF/SHORT if he does something that displeases you? Really now? WHO would sing such a song? And would you REALLY just sit by and post a smiley-critique if I or someone else wrote a song that included a line or two about Cutting a Woman's TITS OFF or
glueing her hole shut if she displeased her man?
NOT trying to start anything, but you posted the lyric, so there's my (angry) response...
--SexyRexy

"Let them say what they
will... no one has ever
raised a statue to a
critic."