Very nice, Mike & Co,

I just love r&b in this style. Feels real and organic, like it should. Nice positive vibe too, singer sounds very natural. Definitely could be a song on her album, I would think.

I really dig the verses and the lift is great, but if you will be pitching it, I think the chorus is not big enough. There's not that much contrast IMO, so I would have preferred a more open soaring kind of melody for the chorus. I suspect your singer can't do that, because of her age/range. So, I would consider rewriting the chorus melody, to make it bigger, allthough it sounds very sweet as is.

But it would depend on the target markets and the artist, of course.

But, lyrics, performances, production ect. just sounds awesome! You guys are PLAYERS!