Thanks Karen

Yes, what will kill me on this for top 40 R&B is clear as a bell to me, I know it before I even try to do one thing with the song.

The arrangment...
Actual chord changes instead of meandering over the same two chords the whole song, ala Alica Keys, John Legend,Justin Timberlake and quite a few others.
A real bridge, intro's outro's a prechorus, Intentional alternate verse melodies...

The subject matter....
No SEX! bad me! the words "boy or girl" are not mentioned. So nothing to rhyme with "world" lol Nothing about.Clubs, bitches or body parts that nonsense...
There are excessive amounts of dumb or dumbed down lyrics on the top charted radio smile

Instrumentation...
A LIVE bass, ANY guitars whatsoever, real strings with actual multiple parts... Counterpoint..
Only horns would have done it in more smile

I could go on, I'm aware of all this already. But bottom line is regardless of me not degrading myself in all those manners this song is still catchy as hell up & down, start to finish. Nobody can deny that whether the song is denied or not smile

Keep us posted on your career, I hope this thing of yours cominng up is a goodie!! smile

All the best and thanks again

Mike


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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