The thing you guys seem to miss is that regardless of fashion trends or whether a song is happy or sad......it has to be a great song to get anywhere.....whichever way you look at it your song is not great....it is not even averasge. Raher than setting out to write the saddest song or happiest song you should first learn how to write a good song to demo. To waste time and money on demoing anything other than a great song is a complete waste of everyones time. As I said before you guys are pretty good at hyping up something.......you first need something decent to hype. So far your efforts at songwriting have been poor.
Demo companies churning out endless turkeys from wannabes make a good living from guys such as you. Sorry to be blunt but sometimes folks need to be told the truth so they can get a reality check.