Originally Posted by SUBURBANCOWBOYS
Hello Michelle,

Although we are not experiencing the problem at our end, it's clear others are so we have since posted this link on the page:

https://files.me.com/shortfuse.kfjc/e7l0g5

Looking forward to hearing your reaction. And thanks for being interested enough to take a listen.

Ya-ta-hey!

rs


Well, I'll be honest, and I haven't read the other comments.

First of all, is the singer doing this as a joke? He's off-key, and you can't really understand what he's singing half of the time. He reminds me of that guy who started out doing a tribute to Elvis (Ronnie something?) A little too over-wrought.

Additionally, the song is too long. And ending the lines with an "ish" sound isn't very appealing (no offense).

Not that I listen to much modern country (I'm more in the Americana genre), but it doesn't sound very current.

I honestly would not listen to this song again. In my opinion, you should start over. I don't like your hook at all. The story is okay, although it's been done a million times and done a million times better.

I give you props, however, for your promotion skills. You've definitely got people commenting, but I would do something about the website. HostBaby has much better options available.

Good luck to you. I don't want to rain on anyone's parade, but you kind of asked for it by hyping this song.

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