Hello Kim.

"Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!"

"What do I like about this?" I like the images and the picture you painted. Your choice of words really created something to see.

Whether or not you captured all the point of views that you tried to do I do not know. It reads/sings more from the point of view an adult who has lost their love. Which works.

"What don't I like?" Nothing. It flows and it goes. smile

Congrads on the 3rd place.

douglas


"Is this a practice? They are all practices." John Denver

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