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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Lau Noah
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 02:43 PM
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ILLIT
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 11:28 AM
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Hey Kim,
My thoughts as I read the lyric was that the repeat of the word "December" in the last line of the chorus was a little too much for the short chorus.
I felt like I wanted it to say "It's just another Day to me".....and then like another poster thought, maybe expand the thought slightly. However, as you pointed out, a melody can move a lyric in a direction that you hadn't thought of yet, and so.....LOL.
I liked it tho....just seemed like the meter that I was feeling made my mind read it as I noted. Good luck!
Thanks, I am still thinking on how to make some slight changes to this one and I appreciate you taking time to read it and comment...:) Kim
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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