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The lyrics need some fine tuning. They appear somewhat diffucult for an artist to sing. Since you play the guitar I would try singing them to see where the problems are and do some re-writing. It is more difficult to critique lyrics without music. The chorus and bridge may be all that needs a bit of work.
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Need comments on this song, please.
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