Hi Michele. Just listened to your song. Its a very positive and serious message that almost gets lost in the very upbeat song. The bounciness of the song had me listening to your voice more as an instrument and I had to go back and read the lyrics again to get everything. Not trying to be over critical here, as a first song, its very good. I wish you much success and hope you find someone to help you with your video. (I'm not good at video editing either)