Here's a different structure.....Kristy...

Tell me if you think it works..?...then listen


Because We Are

I try to be so young
she tries to learn from me
my song is mostly sung
she cli.....ngs to my his...tor y
She reads every line etched on my face
I feed off her silkiness
She says I haven't aged
I've found the milk of kindness

My back up lights are growing dim
Into my faded dreams she swims
Carries me onto the shore
and covers me.....with words...that...I adore

Though I try to tell her
That her time is now...
I will have to suffer
But she should exit ...with a bow
Then her eyes become.......as....distant ....as
the further est ...most star.....
Says life is of this in..stance
We ..are ...because....we....are......

Two lines of instrumental... those high notes.

Says life is of this instance
We are because we are.........in Love
©Blum, Willow

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I loved what the lyric was saying....but I remember being
worried that I wouldn't be able to please Ritt with the melody......

Tis ok to say if you don't like too......

best....
Kaley


Last edited by Kaley Willow; 08/07/08 06:33 PM.