Kaley……Oh okay, the suffering is him, if she left…I was thinking in his old age…..I see that now in your explanation…and yes, I did enjoy seeing this structure. If you separate it differently, maybe you could call it a v v b v v song? I don’t know…just going by the rhyme scheme! It’s fun to kind of pick these apart to see how they work, ya know? Oh…and the lyric I’m working on? ...I think I’d like to enter it on the mentor critique next time around. If I don’t do the mentor/critique, I’ll toss it up on the lyric board so yes, I can get some much needed feedback! Thanks for asking! smile

Bill….I wish I had a guess for ya! But I’m terrible with naming things….give us another hint….!

April…it is fun to experiment…in my case, I was stuck writing anyway, so why not, right?

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist