Ande….two verses for every one chorus right? Then the final verse…I can see why this was structured in that way with the idea of the story and all…and reading the story that inspired this was interesting…

Kaley…. Okay, gal….I read the lyric a couple times first before I listened. I do think it works, but..I admit, I didn’t understand some parts (suffering)…but I understand the gist of it: it’s a love song. And it's very personal. When I listened, I think the music adds to the bittersweet feelings beneath the words. Again, a very personal feel to it. Very pretty, yet somber as well. The lyric sort of lays it all out and then just quietly ends with reflection...which is complimented by your music...fair to say the structure depends on your goal?...thanks for sharing that! smile


A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist