Originally Posted by Rick Norton
Hi Mike..

Sounds like something that came out of Disney's studio. That's a good thing because they are very popular. The percussion sounds fine on headphones.

"Like the one I found" at the end of the chorus sounds like an afterthought. Doesn't really add much as it is sung. Everything else is pretty much perfection.

Rick


Hi Rick Thanks bro

"Like the one I found" is totally there for rhythm purposes,you have to hear how empty and un-fulfilling it sounds with that line missing.
What did happen though is she sang it without much conviction, just not the right zip for the part, the way we sing lines or a phrase or a single word.. are huge in a song.

She went weak on that line and it's sounds a bit uncertain.
But it's effective on that tight stop and very empty and weak with no line there...

That is part of why I'm trying other vocalist on it and this version as well as the version one aren't complete yet.
I WILL spend more time trying to find the right singer than some spend on a whole song.
It may cost me hundreds of dollars trying to do that, but if I have 2 cents then 1 cent is going to my music at least smile

Not sure what the Disney sound is smile But I do know the 60's and 70's R&B soul vibe and that's where this is coming from. Melodically and parts wise... The beat is now, but the core is old.

Thanks, And good spotting on that section!

Mike

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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