Hi Betty,

I actually want the story to be vague...lol...so I guess I've accomplished that. But I've missed the mark if nobody feels anything from the words that are there. I can't say I don't know what the song is about...I do. It's about inner strength and listening to that voice inside yourself. So...ya know...if it brings more confusion than emotion, I'll keep at it....I appreciate knowing your take on it...it's all very helpful! Your idea for "sit down and think" would work if "sit down next to me" conjures up confusion as to why he may do that....hmmmmm.....you've given me stuff to think about, and I appreciate that! smile

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist