Hi Colin,

Hey, thanks for coming back…I’m glad you did, so I can know if any of my editing made a difference! I’m glad there’s more there for you to grasp onto now. And, yes, I don’t say what obtainable thing is going wrong specifically. I could. Since it’s really about the person looking within, anything outside of him really doesn’t matter…but it could be there for detail (Ya know…I’m just realizing, Jen has a suggestion below that might fit the bill for a detail, actually! Check it out! lol). But “look & see what you’re made of” is what I’m trying to emphasize…sometimes you surprise yourself by how you go about things. Didn’t know you had that in you …that sort of thing. Now….I’ve just explained it…instead of that coming out in the lyric… whistle …but if you got a piece of that, or something you can relate to…that’s wonderful from my perspective!

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist