I downloaded the file and gave it a listen. I liked the intro. I am not sure you have the right vocalist for this -- he sounds fine, just doesn't bring it home for you. The chorus does build nicely at the end.

The lyrics are OK, the music is OK. You guys are great at promotion, but the song is just so-so. You all need to write a lot more songs and then worry about what is recordable and pitchable.

But sometimes self-promotion works and maybe you will get a taker on it. Good luck on that, for sure.

Kevin


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