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by Bill Draper - 09/30/26 02:55 PM
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Mara Cole
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/30/26 01:32 PM
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Umm, well...... it's Ok but nothing is grabbing me here.
It would be worthwhile to replace the lead vocal track, I think it's a little off pitch and probably the wrong vocal tone for the piece.
Overall it needs a bit of work lyrically and presentation wise.
Good luck.
cheers, niteshift
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