Hi Tammy, Danny and Ian

This is very pretty! I don't have time to read all the comments so I may be repeating things, sorry if I am.

Had I just listened I probably wouldn't have noticed the little things that I saw while reading along.

There's never been a moment or another place in time
That could ever match the feeling of you here by my side.


There's never been a breath that I would ever want to hold
(Than) swimming deep into your depths to quench my lonely soul

Than feels out of place here without more in front of it and I'm not sure I get this line. Perhaps I'm swimming deep etc.

(chorus)
With your warm breath upon my skin
I feel your fires that burns within
I look into your eyes and see
There's never been a love like you for me



There has never been a kiss placed so softly on my face
That traced a path to my lips for our mouths to embrace

There's never been a burning need or strong desire
That burns with such abandon to set my soul on fire



(chorus)
With your warm breath upon my skin
I feel your fires that burn within
I look into your eyes and see
There's never been a love like you for me



(Bridge)
There will always be a dawn, you will always turn me on
Thoughts of you are on my mind
Thoughts of you and me that last throughout eternity
And spending it one moment at a time



(chorus)
With your warm breath upon my skin
I feel your fires that burn within
I look into your eyes and see
There's never been a love like you for me
oh, a love like you for me

That's all I have, it's beautiful music with a lovely voice and a well written lyric. One day I'm going to write a love song! smile

Dottie

http://www.reverbnation.com/dottiecorley...nue&kick=524819