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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Hey Tammy
You had a lot of nice comments, so I hope this is not redundant. Everything was going good for me and I liked the essence and tenor of the song until I got to this verse:
"There will always be a dawn, you will always turn me on"
For me, it had a cheapening or superficial effect on your otherwise very elegant - almost spiritual love song. I am certain you did not want that to happen and wondered if other options could be explored (eg., instead of "You will always turn me on", maybe, "for me to share in your arms", or something like that.
Doug.
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